literacy narrative review

Over the last few weeks we have written our literacy narrative and have had it revised.  The majority of my papers revisions were grammar errors but also it has helped me realize to break up my sentences more and to not make things so complex.  I also, learned that I need to let my paper just flow and not to choppy. The process of revising was first by fellow students and then by Mr. Adkins.  Its nice having students revise because they tend to find the small little things in your paper they you don't notice.  Mr. Adkins helped a lot with making the paper smoother and giving me ideas how to break up sentences and how to make it less choppy.

The way I went about writing my paper is by choosing something that helped me focus more and turned my life around in a while.  It is also easier to write about something that is close to your heart and thats why I wrote about getting engaged.  My process was to tell how everything happened.  I started with when we first started dating then when we started talking about getting engaged and whey and finally I told about when and How a proposed.  It was an easy topic to write about and tell what I have learned through it all.